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Can you pretty please review chapter seven of my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love You please and thank You :) -Tiffany

Can you pretty please review chapter seven of my romantic fiction piece Let Me Love You??? Pretty Please and Thank You -Tiffany

Can you pretty please review chapter seven of my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love you??? Please and thank you -Tiffany

thank you :) I'm so glad its has kept your interest

Chapter 7 Isabella’s eyes bulged out of her head. What was going on? She shook him gently at first, then shook him by the shoulders as hard as she could, ...

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They said all those things just to scare you, of course. I think you tried really hard to rhyme which left you unneeded things. I don't of course should be ...

“Yeah, Mom, I’ll be there in about five minutes.” “I can’t wait to see you! Are you sure you can’t go just a little faster?” I laughed. “No, Mom. I’m ...

Thank you so much :)

Wow, i love how demanding and percise this is. You have done a wonderful job with imagery and showing. i really have nothing bad to say about this poem, and ...

I liked this. It's an old idea turned into orginality :) I see that some of the other reviewers have been nit picky about grammar so I won't be. Overall: ...

Wow, I really like this. The flow is great and it kept my attention through the whole thing. If there are any errors they are miniscule and I didn't catch ...

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