Rascalover

I remember that, when I was small, I found a baby robin beneath a tree. This sentence is a little wordy to be an opening sentence. i say take out ...

*bump* anyone need a review?????????????

Hello, Iam so glad to be your reviewer for today:) Now on with the review. I'll just point out what needs alittle fixin' :) Running like hell and scarred. Just ...

Wow, I just love this picture. The orange sky goes great with the darkened trees and fog. Bravo! Did ya say this was a first attempt, because its very well ...

Well Hey there :) i was stumbling my way around and look at what I found:) Anywho on with the review: Over it has come a long way. The gradualness ...

Hello, Welcome to YWS! I'm happy to be your reviewer for today :) With what the person before me said I thought this poem was very well written and enjoyable. ...

I must say I love novels in verse so its a plus for me :) Also do you mean like characters cheating? because in stories i think it's fine, real ...

Hello, Im glad to be your reviewer for today :). ASnywho, about your poem, the flow seems to be choppy and short. It flows then it doesnt then it does ...

Hello Deathrose13, I'm happy to welcome you into YWS. Theres only one rule here. You have to review two other pieces of work before you post a piece of your ...

Yes i know where it's going ahah. I have written the whole story and i'm now going through it to fix it up. :) thank you for your input

Hey thanks :) very good info !

Thanks for the request. All done Whos up next?? Pretty please you know you want one :)

Everything was quiet I couldn’t hear a sound, I felt empty. There should be a comma between quiet and I I sat up slowly making every move seem like it ...

The two reviewers above me have pretty much done the whole critque. As a reader I have to tell you this all went a little too fast. Normally her family ...

Thanks i really appriciate your feed back :)