Rascalover

Hello, You have had some great reviews, so mine will be short and sweet. I think you should proff read anything and everything you post on here because it will ...

Hello, and thank you for requesting a review. I am not a fan of fantasy writing, but I do have to say you did a wonderful writing this. I do ...

Chapter 16 Gary stoked the fire once more before he sat down upon the couch. Wrapping his arm around Isabella’s shoulders, Gary placed her other hand on her growing stomach. ...

Hello, Here as requested. Im so sorry it took me so long to review this, but my computer was broken and I didn't have access to another one. Anywho on ...

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Do I have to begg... cause I will :pirate3:

Hello, Thanks for asking for a review :) i really like this and I am glad you edited. There were some small spelling/grammar mistakes that you should catch when you ...

I love your pictures :) They are so good. I don't really have a review, but I just want to say keep up with the good work :) Have a ...

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Thank you so much for the amazing review :) And I just have a question isn't it always in present tense when a character is thinking?

Hello, I have read the first chapter and didn't quiet put a real review, so here I am to review chapter two I really like this idea. PM when ever ...

Hello, It seems you have some very good reviews here :) I would suggest to expand the chapter maybe... it's just so short. Also I really want to encourage you ...

can you please review chapter 15 of my romantic novel