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Re: Influence
This is an essay I had to write for my english class the assignment was to write a an essay to apply for college. The prompt I wrote on was ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: free reviews all around
Anyone??
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: How difficult life could be - Chapter 3
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. I had a very long detailed review written but when I came back my computer deleted it, and i do not feel like repeating ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Love You
thank you I am currently working on chapter 20 the final chapter. Hope itll be up soon :)
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Love You
Thank you so much :)
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Hate
Thank you.
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
Hey, Welcome to YWS, I encourage you to go out and review some other works because everyone deserved to get their work critqued. If you are willing to ask for ...
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: Hate
Thank you :)
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: free reviews all around
Awesome :) Hope it helped. Who's next????
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Love
Love Tender and gentle, Caressing my words to your ear, It takes on a form of it’s own. Filling me with swelling emotions, A thriving heartbeat; It shifts my thoughts ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: The Sun Rose
Hey, Awesome job! This was a really enjoyable read, but I do have one suggestion: Shouldn't it be broken up into stanzas? Thumbs up, Tiffany
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Envied Childhoods
Hey, I am sorry that you are/were in a bad mood. I hope things have gotten better. I really enjoyed this. i'm not the best at reviewing poems, so I ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Hate
Hate It fills my insides, Turning me black. Stone cold, My heart has ceased to pump. Like a poison, It bleeds through my veins. My breath is ice, Chilling my ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Elliot (Chapter 1)
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review :) I am sorry I am so late with it but school just caught up with me. I have read your other reviews and ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Love You(19)
Thanks you guys :)
Sep 6, 2010
