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Rascalover

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Haven't posted in about a year.

    Hello and Welcome back :) This is so short, really short. Maybe try lengthening it just a tad, and the repetition on taclon in the first couple of lines disrupts ...

    Oct 21, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Envy Arising

    Hell and Welcome to YWS, I hope you find your way around easily enough, but if you ever have any questions or need a review please write on my wall ...

    Oct 21, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Perfectly perfect

    Hey, I really enjoyed this poem. You seem to have an awesome grasp on rhythming! But, there are two things that I would like to point out: I sure was ...

    Oct 21, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Alley

    Hello, I am here to review your short story. I hope I am not to harsh because I just want you to be the best reader that you can be. ...

    Oct 21, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: free reviews all around

    who's next? :)

    Oct 21, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Let Me Love You(2)

    Thanks :)

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Novel Workshop Re: The Blood, Book 1: Rubedo

    Hey! I want to review this, but is there any way you could attach this in a different format? I don't have Microsoft Word (I use Works) so the most ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Novel Workshop Re: A Taint Of Red (First Draft)

    Hey there, I'll be glad to review this for you. i haven't read it before, and have sometime on my hands. i hope to be done by wednesday. Is that ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Art inspired by music

    They are suppose to be cartoonish, and i didn't want the bottle to look like a real bud light just something related to alcohol. But, I guess you could get ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews by Carlito :)

    Hey, You review chapter 12 of my romantic novel Let Me Love You The synopsis then was: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Other Re: Antigone: character analysis

    Hey, How ironic, in english class we just got done reading Antigone (the play). I loved your poem. It was very entertaining. I hope you get a good grade. Somethings ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Tempting Fate

    Hey, I'm happy to be one of the first to revie this for you :) This idea is really unique (to me anyway), and I love it. I think you ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Art inspired by music

    My first time at drawing free style :) (all inspired by music) (Inspired by blanme it on the alcohol- by T.I. (I think) ) Bottle says: Blame it on the ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Let Me Love You(18)

    Thanks :)

    Oct 10, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: free reviews all around

    The link didn't work can you give me the title of it? Then I can find it in your profile. :) Until then who's next?

    Oct 10, 2010


Always do what you are afraid to do.
— E. Lockhart, We Were Liars