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Re: Haven't posted in about a year.
Hello and Welcome back :) This is so short, really short. Maybe try lengthening it just a tad, and the repetition on taclon in the first couple of lines disrupts ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Envy Arising
Hell and Welcome to YWS, I hope you find your way around easily enough, but if you ever have any questions or need a review please write on my wall ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Perfectly perfect
Hey, I really enjoyed this poem. You seem to have an awesome grasp on rhythming! But, there are two things that I would like to point out: I sure was ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: The Alley
Hello, I am here to review your short story. I hope I am not to harsh because I just want you to be the best reader that you can be. ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: free reviews all around
who's next? :)
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Love You(2)
Thanks :)
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: The Blood, Book 1: Rubedo
Hey! I want to review this, but is there any way you could attach this in a different format? I don't have Microsoft Word (I use Works) so the most ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: A Taint Of Red (First Draft)
Hey there, I'll be glad to review this for you. i haven't read it before, and have sometime on my hands. i hope to be done by wednesday. Is that ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Art inspired by music
They are suppose to be cartoonish, and i didn't want the bottle to look like a real bud light just something related to alcohol. But, I guess you could get ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by Carlito :)
Hey, You review chapter 12 of my romantic novel Let Me Love You The synopsis then was: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Antigone: character analysis
Hey, How ironic, in english class we just got done reading Antigone (the play). I loved your poem. It was very entertaining. I hope you get a good grade. Somethings ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Tempting Fate
Hey, I'm happy to be one of the first to revie this for you :) This idea is really unique (to me anyway), and I love it. I think you ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Art inspired by music
My first time at drawing free style :) (all inspired by music) (Inspired by blanme it on the alcohol- by T.I. (I think) ) Bottle says: Blame it on the ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Love You(18)
Thanks :)
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: free reviews all around
The link didn't work can you give me the title of it? Then I can find it in your profile. :) Until then who's next?
Oct 10, 2010
