Ranger51

Very good! I don't know if you can edit this or not - I've never done a contest before. I would imagine you could until the deadline, but if you're ...

Hi there! This is pretty good - I adore Aunix, she's the cocky, often-disdainful spy/thief/assassin sort of character you can't help but love. She's awesome! :D You really took off ...

This was very well written - I loved the dark mood and the way emotion muddled the narration. You captured the mood perfectly with an ornately poetic yet brutally honest ...

I'm not sure why this showed up under fantasy... but I like it! My name is Devin. You'll probably hate me. Everybody does. This is my story. Read it. It ...

Awww.... last chapter (so far). I've kind of gotten addicted to this... You MUST post more... I'm going to get lonely without Zavier and Victor and Zoey... Okay, now for ...

AOk. Victor, please keep an eye on Timmy while I=m gone, make sure he gets anything he needs. ”

I really like this so far! (I saw chapter fifteen of this and was curious, so I went back to chapter one and started reading.) However, there's just one thing ...

I don't even know who Pat Buchanan is, but I felt pulled to the name...... I am writing two (and one is the sequel to a book I finished that ...

Thanks, guys! That's weird how Sanna's dad is named Robert... I guess he's really old! :D Glad you like this!

Yes, this is for the 4th of July (although now it's the 5th), and it's American-patriotic, so sorry if I confuse or offend any non-Americans. Robert Smith sighed as he ...

Wow. This is so true and so beautiful... I'm a Christian as well, and I sometimes feel really lost and alone in this world - this really captured that. There ...

I got excited the moment I read this - I've actually long considered doing an SSBB fanfic for a long time, but never actually did... I love the game, so ...

Holy cow. This is amazing. People like that are the lowest of low, and yet somehow it always feels like they win. I hate it - injustice is one of ...

Hi again! I absolutely loved this chapter - it had a lot more about the thoughts and motives of Dandelion, and I felt more like she was a real person, ...

Hi Payne! Great piece! I liked the character of Matt especially - he seemed like a peaceful, sentimental type of person. I agree with a previous comment, though - beating ...