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Re: A Fire For Geno
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! :) I have to say, this is definitely the shortest piece I've read on here, but I like your style. *clears throat* And now I ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Time of Incident (include your timezone): I don't know - it's a constant thing, and I don't remember when I first saw it. Browser: Windows Internet Explorer Page You Were ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Flying
Nice! I remember I watched some footage of 9/11, and when I heard all these bangs, I thought it was the steel supports giving. Then I was told that it ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: The Hero's Decision
Hey guys, just a disclaimer, 'cause I've gotten a lot of comments about it: the first and last quotes were actually taken from the voice recording of the last 30 ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: The Hero's Decision
Ben could hardly interperet the heavily accented voice as it emerged fuzzily from the speakers. "Hi, this is the captain," said the hijacker in a slurred Arabic accent. "I would ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: In Memoriam
I don't remember where I was - I was four (as you've probably figured out), and my mom didn't tell me. But my grandmother was in the Pentagon when it ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Unheard Screams- a 9/11 Memorial
This is amazing! I noticed only two major problems with the plot. First of all, the South Tower was the first one hit, not the second; secondly, the North Tower ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: I Wanted to Change My Name
So pretty! I'm no poet, so I don't really have a review - not that I could come up with one anyways! You know, I have a really common name... ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: She Bears a Traitor's Sword
Awesome. Just... awesome. You hit the topic right-on and used perfect wording!
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: I am
Okay, so I usually don't really bother with poetry much - I'm more of a novel/essay/narrative writer - but I thought I'd give it a try. It was fun doing ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Grace
This is simply awesome! You've managed to make a poem that rhymes consistently, flows smoothly, and get the message across perfectly! And the fact that you did it in four ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: The Forest Speaks (Tears of the Forest discussion)
I've noticed that no one but Spyndle and I has posted for almost two weeks (I'm not blaming anyone who's waiting on someone else to post!). *yells into echoing hallway* ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Gifted-Chapter One
Hello there! Good job on this... but first thing first! I shall proceed to nitpick! Chapter One The ringing alarm felt like it shot through my whole body, (That should ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: The Doll
Hi, Sannah!! I absolutely love this! I've always hated how people let others mold their personalities. If was kind of funny for me, though, because my cousins' dog is named ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Forest Speaks (Tears of the Forest discussion)
What about Arwen? >> Huh. This is a predicament. Is she engaged with another character yet? Wait a minute... how is that a predicament?
Aug 19, 2011
