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Was based on an actual event during the summer. Freaky Phone Calls (':twisted:') “Okay, okay Roxy I get it, but I still have to go.” “Oh come on, your just ...

Hello, I still like the story very much. Its very good. While reading I noticed some spots with comma issues, but maybe I'm just off. I could be wrong. Anyway, ...

Hello, Thank you both for your comments. I'll take what you guys have said and try and apply it to works I'll do soon, and to this piece too. So ...

Hello, Lol i love this poem. Its so cute and imaginative. I could honestly picture a moment like a little kid playing in the tube or pool or something and ...

This has been edited the best i can. I know it most likely has still a lot of errors. Sorry if so. if you please say what kind of things ...

hello, What an interesting story. i really like it, but I've only read chapter three so now i have to find the other two and read them too. i love ...

hello, I would like to say first off very interesting. I like the plot so far murder mystery and disappearance. So the story drags in peoples curiosity. I didn't really ...

hello, I would like to say what a great piece of writing you have. I see true feeling and heart. It was beautiful. Beautiful writing. Hope to see more of ...

hello, I would say you have a lot to say in this poem. In a way its kind of chaotic. Maybe showing life is truly crazy. I understand that lol. ...

I really like the beginning of your story. Its very creative. While looking over it i didn't find anything wrong grammar wise, but then my editing skills are not the ...

Grandpa's Old Garden Before I'm completely out the door My grandma hands me a big old glass green vase Filled with dust and dirt, but slightly wet from being rinsed ...

this was a beautiful poem that shows truth. Good job

hi everyone, Nice to meet you. I'm a new user here, and is trying to find out stuff. I love to write, but can't say I'm very good at it, ...