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This feeling It's so hard to describe. I’ve been underwater before; Felt the burning, scraping, clawing at my lungs... But this is different. Because my lungs work fine. They pull ...

Once again, I'll post the last paragraph too... “Hey, are you all right?” It was a woman’s voice. He realized with a start that he recognized it. Probably someone from ...

Alright, I'm going to post the last paragraph as well to lessen any confusion. Jaresh sighed and walked down the steps that were no longer his; past a fountain he ...

Thanks so much for the helpful advice! I certainly don't want to bore people... Please look out for the next sections, as they get better! I did add some dialogue ...

Yeah, I liked this, but just so you know, Roald Dahl wrote an autobiography called Going Solo... Not that it's relevant. Anyhow, the title caught my eye, and was perfect. ...

I really enjoyed this. On the whole, it was smooth, concise, well-written. I agree with last post... That bit at the end sort of threw the ending. Besides that, I ...

Jaresh peeked through the tiny gap in his curtains, looking out of his window and into the square. The statue of the Warlock, Froll, stood towering above the buildings as ...

Wow, I loved this! Simple, yet elegant and refined. You have a great writing style! I can't think of any criticism, I just know I'm going to bed happy! Thank ...

So, feel a little insignificant as the young, brand new member commenting here, but I wanted to throw in my two cents... The title is perfect and caught my eye ...

Yeh, I loved these. Can't wait for the next one. There are so many powerful aspects to this series. Stephanie Meyers has the spectacular ability to take an old mold ...

Mellow Greetings, Yookie Dookie! If you have seen the movie The Bachelor and the Bobby Soxer (Shirley Temple post-curly "Good Ship Lollipop" phase, and Cary Grant, plus, my fave, Myrna ...