RandomGrrl

I love this! So funny, but so true. I love love love the ending, but there's a few obvious mistakes I'm sure you'll find. This is sheer brilliance! PM me ...

Aged Two Years: Melody looked up from her car seat, giggling. Her mother was smiling at her from the passenger seat, tickling her toes. Melody squirmed and laughed harder. Her ...

I like everything you write. :D Glad you decided ta join!

Hey ya'll! Thanks for the crits. This poem is actually very difficult to explain. The "I knew you twice" line is not explained in the poem, but its true in ...

Hey there! Kay you all, I kind of left Suffocating in there multiple times because the title is Suffocating, and that was my theme... However, if you all think its ...

I think that, yes, the idea is cliched, it would have to be because princess is displaying an emotion that basically everybody experiences. But come on people! EVERY IDEA HAS ...

Verrrry nice. I love the imagery and everything. There was only one thing I didn't like. maliciousness in his voice and a devilish sense Maybe you could change this to ...

Nice, I really like it. Keep writing! :D

Nice ta meetcha. I am... not shy. In fact, I'm more likely to bombard someone's guestbook and bug them till they say Shut UP! So... anyway, besides that we have ...

Intuition (Part 1) Aged Eleven: Melody Lowe took a bite from her chocolate bar, looked out of her car window and, to her dismay, saw very little. There were a ...

Yes! The art is perfected! Love it. Don't change anything else. :D RG

Really nice, love the imagery. You mispelled invisible up there... says "invisable". 'Sides that, I love it... freaky!

Eh, nothing to crit. I adore this! So beautiful!

AH! Don't listen! (sorry Niteowl :D ) The details are great! Love it love it. Don't change a thing.

I liked this, the idea behind it, however, I would request a little more rhythm. If it isn't meant to have rhythm, then, hey, way to go for stepping outside ...