RandomGrrl

Woah. Just... woah. Big, giant, gargantuan gold star. Whew. I'm totally blown away... *trembles in awe* Woah. Wow. Impressed, very much so. No nitpicks. Very artsy, but as far as ...

hiking, but they don’t let me get out that much.” :P Made me smile. Hee. Her pointed face was curios and expectant, but not nosey. curios= curious other supplies in ...

From yoha_ahoy: Questions: 1. Is this post a good length, or would you rather I post longer/shorter segments at a time? Perfect posting length for me. Only take a couple ...

Current Day: “Wake up, Ms. Lowe. Up and at ‘em.” Mel opened her eyes. Her head burned, pain surging through the layers of sleep. She was in a white, sterile ...

Love love love this! Little typo: His face was pale and a deep boredom only a life of sitting in an enclosed office could bring about was etchedinto his eyes. ...

Brilliant, once again! I loved that you bring Zoe back like this and we meet her again from Daniel's point of view... genius. I think the first half of the ...

Wow, this is great. You have some really strong, powerful aspects in this story, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it. The characters are very interesting and real. ...

This was completely lovely and interesting. Bittersweet in a way, but still a great peice. Very well written, I must say. Nice work! Only one thing I noticed: "He was ...

I love that this was fast! I was rushed into the story, and quickly got comfortable. It felt like I was right there next to Daniel, walking with him, or ...

Aged Twenty-Two Years: Melody walked along a riverbed placing each foot carefully in front of the other. After reaching Vermont, Melody had found that there are some distinguishable differences betwee

True and captivating. You drew me in with the title, and the way you switch the time period (two weeks ago, today, tomorrow) really works and adds definition to the ...

AAH! I know I need to space the paragraphs better, it won't let me edit it yet... I'll do it as soon as poss. Hate that... Anyway, please share your ...

Aged Twenty-Two Years: 1-2-3-4-5… 6-7-8-9-10… 11-12-13-14-15… As she skipped up the stairs to her floor in the dusty hotel, Melody Lowe counted each one, though she already knew exactly how ...

Hey! :D This is such a great poem; heavy, but interesting, captivating and unique. One nitpick: "is the one im living!" Should be "I'm." That's it! RG :D

I love that you have the "quite lovely" at the end of every paragraph, love the whole peice. It's powerful and deep and interesting. You can relate sooo much to ...