Raindeer

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LMS VII Stowaway Mission Project: Middle grade realistic fiction novel, currently untitled (subject to change) Role: Stowaway :pirate3: Goal: 1 chapter/week (about 1k words per chapter) Time zone: PST

I LOVE this idea. Science fiction and time travel? Romance? asdfghjkl, count me in. For ideas how she discovers her power/uses it: - for your first idea (looking at an ...

Oh my gosh, what an adorable idea! :O I agree with Birkhoff - Shirley Bee sounds really nice on the tongue, and it's very cute. ^-^

I think Rosabella, Anastasia, and Cordelia all sound equally fancy! I like all three of them. Also, looks? Hmm, maybe like dark skin and dark curls. Cool dark sunglasses 8) ...

This is very nice! I want to improve as much as I can while I still have the time to do so. Thank you~ ((I love the 'life lesson' at ...

Oooh, that's a nice list and has a lot of variety! Gracias! c:

I think it's great! I found nothing wrong with the excerpt, but I feel as if the synopsis could use a read over and a few polishes. There are a ...

worst: awkward, hate social situations, anxiety, etc etc best: i like to believe i'm very caring and loyal

Honestly, it seems fine. I wouldn't say too cliché - a bit, maybe, but not too cliché. If you're worried it's too cliché as you're writing, just add plot twists! ...

Chapter books? Hmm. Definitely first grade. Junie B. Jones.... Oh my..

@Cspr that Amazonian Princess... Oh my. I think I have to do that one.

You don't want blood and gore. Pretty much. Don't go in detail with how bloody things are, or what exactly the gash looks like on his stomach, or anything of ...