Young Writers Society

So I'm still stuck with only my mouse and my computer after oh, about a year. I have an older peice called Link and Navi which some people where impressed ...

At this time, I was only a young girl of the age of six, born on December 3rd 1929. Ok, well I'm not sure if the exact date is necessary, ...

Oh Wow. I can't do much better on the computer and I absolutely have no idea how to critque this even though I do draw myself. But you will always ...

Hello! This story is good, but you need to change a couple things. The wispy , cold winds of the blistery morning ran through his brown hair, coiling it around ...

Oh gosh, your avatar is the synonym for pure love. So welcome! What should I call you? No, I'm not going to type out your whole username everytime, no-ho way. ...

Hello there! Your first paragraph is broken up mid sentence, did you know that? It also has an awful lot of sentences that start with "he". Honestly, it's not that ...

Chapped Eating the dandruff scabs off my head my eyes are watering from nonexistent onions or emotions always there is a pipe cleaner constricting my heart or scalding jello in ...

Welcome to YWS! I am a weird person too. I love the author Avi! But the only book I have read from Stephen King is 'It'. I might read once ...

Harsh reviews are harsh =3 Go ahead and give it your all, it's one of my few mouse drawn digital art pieces. I'm going to be getting a tablet soon ...

The wispy cold winds of the blistery morning ran through his brown hair, coiling it around the air. His icy blue eyes where wide and dry as they stared ahead ...

Evees don't have two tails.

Hiya and welcome to YWS! Two rules you should know: 1- Review two works before posting any of your own. It helps make sure everybody gets a review. Also, people ...

Hi, I'm alwaysawriter but you can call me any varation of the name, including Kat (which is my name). Welcome to YWS! Wierd stuff is good, depending on what type ...

I agree the horns look like something simple standing in a complex area. Do something with them, like more shading perhaps?

I agree, I think instead of such a clam look the wolf should have more of a worried, or painful look. Also the fire could use some work, it is ...