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Re: Mechanical Fairies (part 2)
Part 2 (890 words) of a 3,436 words short story I wrote. I tell you guys the amount of words so you, the great reviewers, won't be afraid of the ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Mechanical Faries (part 1)
Thanks a lot for the review! I am sorry for a long post, but it is supposed to be a short story so I don't want to separate it out. ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Mechanical Faries (part 1)
Part 1(1,390 words) of a 3,436 words short story I wrote. I tell you guys the amount of words so you guys wont be afraid at the wall of text ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The Regiments, scene 3
And im here for the 3rd part of "The Regiments"! And 1st one to review too! Yay for me! =D Now lets see... She slipped her leather gloves on , ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: The Regiments, scene 2
Let me see...this story remind me of Final Fantansy series, with all those names. Shiva, Kyle, Tidus, Reno...those name instantly trigger something in a 3Fs(Final Fantansy Fan) like me. The ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Once Upon a Time(Chapter one of this epic novel)
*deep breath*....Ok, I have calmed myself down...but....THIS STORY IS SO FUNNY!!!!*rolling around laughing again* Well, sorry for the long absence, but I have exams and my own story to write. ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: The Regiments
Hi cookies! I got your PM, and here I am reading your story again! =D(although it is just the prologue, I still like it!) Some of what I want to ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Little blood red riding hood ch 1&2
Thanks! =D I know I fail at grammar, because I am not an english speaker, but I will try my best to fix it!
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: THE BATTLE OF THE REVENANT
Finally finish reading your story! I was studing for exam, sorry..=.= now here is the review: It rang out in the dark nothingness that surrounded nothing but a small man ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Summer Is For...
I dedicate this summer for writing! I will make up all the time I have lost from studying for exam!I really want to finish my story... D=
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Little blood red riding hood ch 1&2
Thanks for reviewing my story! Glad you like it! Now, here are some explaination: Just out of curiosity, what does hovels mean? Well, a hovel is “Small crude shelter used ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Little blood red riding hood ch 1&2
Thanks for pointing out those errors! I rely too much on MSword check spelling/grammar...and I wrote it in a rush at 1am to 4am while doing homework...Heh, excuses, nevermind them...Well,this ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Weird Places to Write
I like to sit on the grass in the park near my house. The wind is nice there. Sometime I use paper and pencils(I just have a strange hatred against ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: new
Hi Ariella! I like your name! Well, every one have covered everything there is, so I guess this is just a normal welcome... Hope you have fun on YWS!
May 27, 2009 -
Re: A.I.R.
I like this story! I want to fly with my own wings one day too! That will cure my acrophobia(afraid of height)! =D Anyway, here is the review: She had ...
May 27, 2009
