Raimunda

Aww. Galerius already critiqued so there's no point me even trying. Darnit. But I can say that I don't really agree with the concept. I mean, I used to, but ...

its not enough for you Capital 'I', dear. boys come and boys go Why you no capitalise?? You don't have to, but I think it would suit this poem more. ...

eh WOW. I love it. It's real and relatable and clever and all that schizz. J'adore ca. She looked across to the other table at the group of girls, as ...

I love this poem. It's clever and witty and fast paced and condensed and just overall brilliance. It made me giggle at the end. Im going to nitpick because I ...

Hey I have found my first poem. Since this is my first poem give some nice critique on it. Thank you all in advance. Well. I'll critique it! Ana What ...

I like it. Its unorthodox and refreshing and new and it IS poetry because I've read stuff like this before. And I actually think it's brilliant. "Repetition doesnt emphisize how ...

Tut tut tut. You has done none reviewing. YWSers be not impressed. Anyway moving on to POETRY!!! First thing about this is that its a great start, but it is ...

Hey thevoiceinside I like it. You get your point across and you do it in a charming way. It reminds me of a hymn that I can't remember the name ...

What is life, but a collection of strife carried on right through the years What is death, But just a final rest an ending of those tiresome tears? Why is ...

Alone Lovely is the moonligt lovely are the stars yet voices from the doorway aslike Is this 'like' or 'as'? approaching sharks Slightly odd similie here. Sharks? Of all the ...

I like it. It's really sad and depressing, but it's clever and the rhymes don't seem forced. It flows, man. I wasn't so sure about the use of the word ...

The bang of a gun my soul shudders as the man beside me falls war begins. Bullets like the fist of God plunge deep into the hearts of men figures ...

I've decided I believe in God. I think that the world and people and outer space and the whole schibang of creation couldnt possibly have just popped into existance by ...

thats a really interesting view, because I think the first one is probably the most accurate and the others are weaker. Its interesting to see what other people think about ...

Marilyn Monroe is the Daphne of the modern age? Are you comparing Warhol to Bernini? What? Thats like comparing the power of Gordon Brown to the power of my maths ...