Raimunda

Pay attention in a German lesson? German ? Me? Ha. As if. Yeah, so instead of learning the past tense of some obscure and unsayable word, I was wondering what's ...

I think that this is really interesting, and emotional; how the narrator is supremely pissed off and now hates the person she loved so much. It was powerfully written. But ...

Heylooo. So, depressing poem! It's well written though (although the fact that you didn't capitalise your I's made it seemed more rushed and less professional; change ca!) and interesting to ...

Your topic was original and interesting, and it was interesting to see your interpretation. I reckon if I ever tackled this subject I would probably write about how the murderer ...

I had to read it twice because I didn't get it at first, but that's because I'm stupid and not because it's rubbish, because it isn't; it's really good. You ...

Hey emmyc. C'est moi. My favourite things about ta poem. I don't know why I'm writing in french. I'll stop. Oui? Oui. I like the ending of the second verse, ...

I don't know if this is poetry so I put it in 'other' because it is...dubious. AND even if it IS rubbish, I broke up from school today so I ...

Well, my poem wasn't good, but it was controversial! I am really enjoying reading all the reviews! Thanks for taking your time to agree with me or yell at me- ...

Well, it made me laugh. Not sure of its actual poetic callibre, though.

Pfftt. You don't need punctuation advice. I used to fly With my wings outstretched I'd soar so high For you were my catch. We have three lines of awesome, then ...

Bleurgh I am so jealous of you. IT'S NOT FAIR.

Not really anything, I just didn't want to do my Biology. The last verse is...iffy. I have about a hundred different versions of it but they were all crapper than ...

I havd heard of a mythial object called a Rhyming Dictionary, which contains hundreds upon thousands of rhymes. Tis the stuff of ledgend!

The old man was sat under the tree. This wasn’t by any means an unusual occurrence. He sat under the tree every day, whether it rained or snowed, or stayed ...

Aww. So short. It's good, but it's just the opening verse of something. Write it more! Expand on your points. How did you disappoint your dad? I'm sorry dad that ...