Raimunda

I've never drawn in charcoal before, and I've decided that I hate it; it's messy and you can't rub out and you come out looking like you live in a ...

It's really good and the grammar and punctuation was tight. My only problem is that you kind of mix and match romantic wording with modern stuff, like when you have ...

This made me chuckle. My favourite bit? This. 'bout the latest celebrities or brain-washing cults. Lol. I do think some of your rhymes sounded forced, but as if I even ...

I just wanted to say thanks for reviewing my Dear Dad thing. Twas mucho appreaciated. xxxx

She is dying and I don't want her to. She looks up at me and blinks, and whispers something that I cannot hear. She looks so thin and weak. I ...

When I was reading this, this song came to mind: It's Dry Your Eyes Mate by the Streets and your poem is kind of the same style. This is a ...

Hey Kayyo The thing I found when I read this is that there doesn't really seem to be a pivotal reason behind it. What are you trying to tell me? ...

For Gadi's gay contest. Dear Dad. I know that you said I shouldn’t contact you anymore, but I think that you should know what’s going on in my life. I ...

I understand that this was probably just a spur-of-the-moment thing, but your rhymes seemed really forced. E.G farewell, hell. I don't understand why you're seeing us agin in Hell? Are ...

I like how you built the struggle up and up and up and then when you came to the end you showed us the sense of accomplishment; after a while ...

Laughed at THIS bit- "a list of words potentially forming a dialogue" This was really clever. And now I know that all those guys who didn't talk to me at ...

Lol. Very rude but it gets across all the points people have about why Twilight is bad. I wonder how long it will be before a Twilight-lover attacks you, though. ...

AWESOME! It's about a place I went to in Cumbria, just below Scotland. I'm SO pleased you got that!!!!! Thanks for the review. xxxx

Haven't been on YWS for ageess... one of my poems has been locked while I was away. Whoops. Naughty me. I ran along the moors and I whistled with the ...

Lol I love how the first thing you see is the horses bum. It's kind of expressionist, this; all the scenery is moving in some way, and you really put ...