Rahul

1st of all i notice u get very less comments please short your story divides the parts you have made into different posts then only anyone will read it,,,

Hi a good story i really appreciate your work just polish your details and style you know a spark is needed for a good story your story has that but ...

Hi.. Here's chapter 2 of Sizzling Six where Cody enters the new town... Please shoot your comment about the plot it means whether story is going good the actual "STORY" ...

Hi.. i wrote 1st chapter of a story its about some bunch of kids who investigates their new school and find something weird.. Someone said to leave line between and ...

good pretty good.. I like your details keep up the good work.

good pretty good.. I like your details keep up the good work.

HI... I am writing a short story a detective one actually.. Here' s the 1st chapter 1 An old ending and a new beginning “Bye friends so, today’s my last ...