RachelJY

Chapter Two -- The Child Conceived In the fullness of time, God sent the angel Gabriel to Nazareth, a town in Galilee, to a virgin pledged to be married to ...

hey i'm kind of new here too. waiting to hear your works. need help or reviews, just tell someone. thats what we do here.(help each other) homestly, some of us ...

Hey I'm Rachel and I'll be reviwing for you today. I can look into the ceiling like a well. Not even clocks move clockwise. Who needs innocence when there are ...

This is great; I liked the description of the singing. The tree-house was good too. I haven't read the previous chapters, but i definately plan to. your story sounds like ...

This is great; I liked the description of the singing. The tree-house was good too. I haven't read the previous chapters, but i definately plan to. your story sounds like ...

Wow...Completely amazing. I loved it! It's flawless. It showed how much we see set things in a set way. Instead of the usually thing of dragons being uncaring , you ...

First, you need a title, but I'm asuming you'll add that later. Second, I really like the story line,and I am waiting to read more. I'm looking forward to reading ...

I like that you feel completely free sharing your testimony. I have grown up in a christian home, but I never truly understood what it all meant untill I was ...

I like that you feel completely free sharing your testimony. I have grown up in a christian home, but I never truly understood what it all meant untill I was ...

This sounds like a great book/idea for a story. I want to see more about it. If it is a book and you are simply reviewing it, I want to ...

yeah don't worry i will explain. oh and about the King Adam and Queen Eve, I was in corperating the child like tale that i remember being told ever since ...

Loved it! Lol so loud! reminds me of the lyrics my friends and I sing in class to this song. Although, we never actualy write them down or remember them. ...

This is great. I know we all wish to be remembered long after we are gone, but remember that you will be remembered for the kind gentle actions you do ...

are we allowed to use strongly religious views in our stories? cause I do that a lot

Chapter One -- Prologue -- In the Beginning Dear John, I know many will embark on putting together an account of the things that we have seen fulfilled among us, ...