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Azilaz! I think the reason I've never reviewed anything of yours is that I'm so useless with short stories and that you're too good for me to rely on the ...

Vi, I am now beaming in pride. Blow it up indeed! You've now introduced a nice immediate conflict/problem/situation with immediate repercussions to add a nice layer of frosting to the ...

Hey Serenity, I'm back! This time coming to you live from the floor of my living room. Now isn't that exciting?! (No, not really, I know.) So, this is still ...

Hi, Floral! I'm Rach, here to review. And... I guess I'll just be up front about it. Princesses running away from unwanted marriages aren't exactly the newest things in the ...

Hi, Serenity! I'm Rach, here to review for ya. First, I have to echo what Matthew said above me about spacing out your paragraphs. It's a bit tedious on your ...

I usually don't review poetry. In fact, I never review poetry. You are my first-ever poetry review. I don't know whether that's a good thing or a bad thing. I ...

Hi, Snoink! It's so much fun to read this and know so much of the backstory and such ahead of time. So exciting, really. I agree with previous comments that ...

Creeeeeeeepy. the best of ways. All right, Giselle. I'm Rach, here to review.. Two itty technical matters first. The first one is, don't forget to space your paragraphs out. YWS ...

Hi Destiny, I'm back! First, did you know that citric acid is made with the aid of fungi? I did. 'Tis one of the many "interesting" things you learn in ...

You have officially won my heart. That is all. ...well, not really. I have plenty to say. On the praise-for-yous! end, you continue to avoid the problems I usually associate ...

Hey, Alex. Rach is the name, reviewing's the game... etc. etc. etc. I haven't read any previous chapters, so I'm not entirely sure of what's going on right now, but ...

Yo, CookE! I'm back! Though apparently I'm going to be reviewing everything out of order for you... c'est triste. Truth got a lot of your punctuation errors, so I'd recommend ...

Hi again, IKnowAll! (I need to get you a nickname, by the way). I'm back. Anyway, this is now in reference to my review on the second chapter... Again, I ...

All right, Just You. I must admit I was dubious throughout the first portion of this story here. While it flowed nicely as Matthew said, and was cool and written ...

Hi there, Toly! I am very much intrigued by your idea here (though it is late on a Friday and my mental state has been compromised by a week of ...