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Re: Use of Profanity
Curse words are just words that society has labeled as profane. They are not inherently profane or bad or anything like that. In fact, the F word in English is ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
negative gazillion out of 10 You abused a comma, bro. Don't need one after "sponge." Otherwise I am of course interested in what Stephen King mayhem this character has gotten ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
3/10 - lots of adjectives. The nouns make me wary of cliches, and the main verb is a bit of an overkill, since light can't cascade. The focus on the ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: Town name help?
I also like Hawthorne-something. But, there will be an association with Nathaniel Hawthorne, so make sure that's an association you want. People'll read into it.
Jan 7, 2015 -
Re: Speak for Yourself
My name is Swanbridge. Officially of course my name is Ivzek Reklov, and I was born in the hold of Swanbridge. But I grew up there as well, I expect ...
Aug 19, 2012 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
6/10: It does hint at a problem, since obviously she's upset at something, but it's sort of a general hysteric/angry reaction rather than a unique and person-specific one, and we ...
Apr 30, 2012 -
Re: The Plot Game
It looked like the daughter was murdered because the fingerprints on the knife handle were someone else's.
Apr 12, 2012 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sci-fi thriller with a futuristic James Bond sort of figure. Faced with a task so impossible you can't even begin to think about it. Honor's Gauntlet
Apr 7, 2012 -
Re: the riddle game.
Here's one, but I have a few more I'll share later. A man is driving in a black car, on a one-lane road. The road is black, the sidewalks are ...
Mar 30, 2012 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Oh, something romantic! We could have a picnic in the garden, or maybe we could even take a ride out of the city! I've only--I've never been out there before." ...
Mar 17, 2012 -
Re: Story in Six Words
"But it's organic fur!" she insisted.
Mar 6, 2012 -
Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?
I'm studying abroad and doing NaNo! It's going to be an incredible experience! Not going to forget writing 50,000 words in November in Berlin. So far, everything's going well! I've ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: What would your characters do?
She would ask what that meant, since the term isn't floating around (fantasy world), and once you told her, she would think it's silly. Why wouldn't you eat animals? If ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Snoink's Piggie
I'm in agreement with Jas here. It's so cute, I don't really know what else to say! Not to mention, I'm a horrible artist myself, so I'm not particularly qualified ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
chocolate
May 4, 2011
