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Thanks Gabbs! It's here in Other, though, because it's half non-fiction and way, way more poetic than my usual fare. But, thanks again!

Hey Baywolf! Just wanted to say that, first off, I feel your pain about having a.... um.... very traditional... fantasy story but loving it too much to give it up. ...

Hi CardDragon! Rach here, and I've got a few suggestions for you. First--don't forget to proofread before your post! You've got quite a few errors here and there--typos, missing spaces, ...

Hallo! Wie geht's dir? Sorry, couldn't resist. I love foreign languages myself :D Anyway, welcome to YWS! Rach

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You're getting closer! Transitions and the like are still irking me a bit, but it's mainly nitpicking time. The main one is still here: She lay sprawled across the bed, ...

Rach found the shiny red mp3 player mighty inspiring, and scuttered off in search of a strawberry milkshake. On a second thought, she ordered a chocolate one.

If You Want To Write by Brenda Ueland is my writing bible, so to speak. It might be a bit hippie-dippie for some people, but I found it incredibly inspiring. ...

Hi, Phonetically Accurate! Welcome to YWS! I'm fairly new myself, but I also came/come from another forum (where 'critique' is the word too) and I also write fantasy. But, I ...

6/10, because he looks familiar, but I can't tell from where.

I'm one of those who doesn't plan. Just the thought of planning out a novel from beginning to end, actually, makes me want to cry, or die, or melt, or ...

And reviewed!

I think everything I've got comes down to two main points, at least as of now as I type these letters. The first is that right now, even after reading ...

Now that was an effective bribe, Seemingly! And Skins, reviewed, albeit late!

I am so sorry for the delay in getting to this. You asked me to read days and days ago, but, I'm here now! This might be because I haven't ...