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Would you mind reviewing ? It's a general fiction/nonfiction/prose poetry sort of deal. Thanks!

Thanks Jen! I'll work on the repetition... it's an old habit.

Oh, how terrifically interesting ! I'm so intrigued I can't even put the right words to it. I guess I'll just have to settle with, "I think you've got something ...

(Why, this looks familiar! :D) Julie wants a flower, but she lives in a desert.

Awwww. Now look what you did. This made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, and I don't think the spiders in my heart liked the sudden burst of sunlight. ...

Under 100 pounds? Oh geez, that's skinny! Yikes. I can't quite find a smilie to express my horror. But anyway, onto critique. I have two main complaints. The first is ...

Thanks Tamara!

Phew. That was really, really long! You might want to break it up into shorter chapters or only post parts of it at a time. Otherwise, it's a lot to ...

Hi Calligraphy! I'm requesting a review for "What She Liked," a short-story/nonfiction/prose poetry sort of deal. It's very short (maybe five paragraphs) and I'd love to get your thoughts on ...

Hey Tam_ara! Would you mind reviewing for me? It's a general fiction/nonfiction/prose-poetry sort of thing, and very short. Pretty pretty please? :D

Hi Skillful! This was a fun read. You've got the space-soldier-adventurer voice down, and, as a result, this was really easy for me, as a reader, to get into. I ...

Hey there BlackSheep! I haven't read the first two chapters, so I won't dwell too much on plot or character or anything, but I do have a few writing suggestions ...

Hi KitxKat! 'Tis Rach, and I've got a few suggestions for ya. I'm liking the initial premise of this a lot, and I usually strongly dislike first person fantasy. But, ...

Thanks oodles, Jai! I went through and edited with your suggestions, and methinks it's much better now. Does it really work as a short story? I guess I keep imagining ...

10/10. Because I have a good friend who loves McFly, and so this is for her.