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Whoops! I reread my review right now and realized I forgot to mention the other style vibe I got. My thoughts run away with the spoon far too often. But ...

You know those really annoying people who could, after the first fifteen minutes of a movie, tell you exactly how it’s going to end? And, not only that, but can ...

Well, the first thing to note is that having flaws doesn't give a character immunity from the "Mary Sue" title. I know the Mary Sue litmus tests determine Suehood by ...

Hi there! Name's Rach, and I'm reviewing... obviously. :) Or, I would review in more detail, but I think I'm missing something with this piece. It doesn't seem complete to ...

Oh, something was so intriguing about this. Somewhere whilst reading, I forgot that I was looking for grammar and such and just kept reading on. I liked the characters, the ...

Wowza. That was a long post. Maybe split your chapters into two for posting purposes? Usually garners up more readers, especially when the grammar's clean and spelling is standard, like ...

I like that ending line. The 'yep' made it, added an air of nonchalance, recognition of the simultaneous mundanity and peculiarity of it. I also really liked the reference to ...

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Hi Ally! Welcome to the site proper! I'm Rachael, or just Rach, and if you have any questions, I'll do my best to answer them. You can always ask the ...

Also something for writers to note, after they get the horse-specific stuff that you mentioned straight: It takes years and regular practice for someone to be able to ride long ...

So, YWS. 2010. What can I say? I joined back in July, when I was down on my writing and in need of some young writer enthusiasm to remind me ...

Age: 19 Nationality: American Did you read all/some/none of the Harry Potter books? All of them! And, excluding the last one, several times over. Did you watch all/some/none of the ...

First off, I love your signature to itty bitty pieces, and I might try it out as my own life motto. Bound to make things more exciting. But anyway, back ...

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Skating?! That's so exciting. I love ice skating (even though I've only been once) and at one point in my life was a prolific rollerblader. Can't now because I can't ...