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Hi Perviguana! I'm Rachael, better known as just Rach! And, I echo the questions of those before me. What sorts of stories are you interested in writing down? (And when ...

Hi PaperbackHeart! I'm Rach and I'm here to review... Your questions first! 1) I'm not entirely sure if I like it yet. I think I'd need to read more to ...

--Frequent the poetry board on my other writers' forum --Read more first chapters of books (Because if I start reading, then I'll keep reading for hours. But if I don't ...

Hi there! I'm Rach, here to review! Whoa! That was one jam-packed chapter. Well, that was one jam-packed pair of chapters. One jam-packed day, really. Your main character here leaves ...

Hi EccentricityAside! My name's Rachael, but everyone calls me Rach. And, I'm here to say, Welcome to YWS! We're a community of young writers, as you probably figured out. As ...

Banned for not having a frog in your avvie!

Banned for having a palindrome number of posts! (676)

And, reviewed! Next up?

I read this back when you first posted, and now I'm wishing I'd replied then. I think I'm territorial over reviewing grounds. Which is sort of pathetic, now that I ...

Now open for business again! But please, a few at a time!

No, I did not just pull my shoulders back and sit up straight. Really. I mean it. Okay, I lied. My posture's awful, though I'm really trying to work on ...

Aww, a short and sweet prologue. I thought it was cute. Don't know if that was exactly what you were going for, but there it is. Anyway, hi! The name's ...

Hi Asteral! The name's Rach and I'm here to review! First, I should say that I haven't read the prologue you referred to, but I think I followed along well ...

You most certainly can still include all the thoughts and feelings of the character! It's just all about what angle you describe it from. Think of it like a super ...