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And done! Oh, and there are new rules and regulations! Please read 'em!

Hi, Anthony! I'm Rach, another older member. Here to say, welcome! And, don't worry about age. Also, I love how your dialect comes through in this welcome post. It's hecka ...

Hi, Moonlight Assassin! I loved your username. I also love that you have trouble making summaries. Now I'm know that I'm not alone. ...on the summary part, that is. Anyway, ...

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Hiya, Anger! I'm finally reviewing one of your works. And I think I have three things for you... 1. Differentiate the perspectives You have two first-person perspectives here, from two ...

Hi Nameless! I'm Rach :D Welcome to YWS! A fantasy writer, you say? You'll fit right in. I write fantasy myself, also of the more world-exploring variety (Europe is great ...

Hi ShadowKnight! Welcome to YWS! I'm Rachael, or just Rach. And the frog is Ribbit. Nice to meet you! Yay for sci-fi! Glad to see another sci-fi fan around these ...

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Cruelty, making me chose between Black Swan and How To Tame Your Dragon. Cruelty, I say. Also, no True Grit? Faced between Black Swan and Dragon, I might have gone ...

I first got into writing when I was in third grade. My teacher had us doing a project where we were to write our own fairy tales. I had so ...

Hi there! I'm Rach, here to review. I haven't read the other chapters. Your title just caught my attention, and so I figured I'd check it out anyway. That said, ...

Your rereading guess was correct--"that" is correct in that context. If you're using American English, this is the distinction between that and which: --Use "that" in a restrictive modifier. Or, ...

Hi Sweeney! I'm Rach, and I'm reviewing today! I like the idea you have here. It's got a different edge to it than I'm used to. And you've also got ...

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