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You know what the cool thing is? Despite this being a sequel, I wasn't lost. Might actually make a good story on its lonesome (though it's so early, it's hard ...

Hello again! I have to agree with Allie--Bryan's definitely a smart kid for saying no to this Reinna. Because... well, because Reinna is awfully hard to like, and that might ...

I'm in agreement with Jas here. It's so cute, I don't really know what else to say! Not to mention, I'm a horrible artist myself, so I'm not particularly qualified ...

Hello again, I was so sad this was so short. In fact, the length is probably my biggest issue. That, and how this fits in with the previous chapter. This ...

Chrome power! But, still, yay to Firefox overtaking IE. IE...InEfficient, InEffective.

They're so spiffy! I need to donate again, though. Green's more froglike.

Hi there, Brooklyn! I haven't read the other chapters, so I'm not going to be too much use on the story front (though I'll do my best!). As a consequence, ...

Hiya, Ritehunter. 'Tis Rach and Ribbit (the frog) here to review. First things first, you might want to space out your paragraphs. The site gets rid of indenting when you ...

Hi, Jedigeek! I've got one word for you: punctuation! You've got run-on sentences galore here, and it makes the story hard to read. So, go through and add those periods. ...

Of course, if you're not a fan of insanity than this might not be the place.... ;D Oh, she's insane all right. She's best friends with a frog.

Yay, hi, Litl...Little... Little! Welcome to YWS! This is a wonderful place indeed, and it sounds like you're here for all the right reasons. I doubt your writing is terrible, ...

Well, damn. Usually, I'm not a fan of first person. And usually when there's a hint of romance and the first-person narrator is female, I groan a little bit and ...

(Thanks for stopping by! This is the first part of the first chapter to my new novel, Honor's Gauntlet. This'll all be rewritten one day, so I'm not too interested ...

Hi, IKnowAll! I'm Rach, and I guess I get the honor of being the first to review this. (Unless someone steals my spot while I'm rambling at you.) First, I've ...

Technically, your name only means "Partial"