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Snoinkus.... je suis... back. Don't know "back" in French yet. Sigh. Anyway, I chowed through the first entries here. Absolutely chowed. Chowed and was relieved that Solea was back in ...

Snoinkers. I am possibly in love. This chapter sold me on the story, for whatever reason. Despite the fact that I know more about what's going on than perhaps anyone ...

Hi Miguel! Welcome to YWS! I'm Rach, the frog's Ribbit, and together we're... well, Rach and Ribbit. Anyway, I agree with Hope. What types of stuff do you write? What ...

Hi Kels! I'm Rach. The frog's Ribbit. Quick question for ya. Why be a writer when you grow up when you can be one right now, this very day? (Yeah, ...

Oh, do I spy a shiny new review star under Ribbit? Why, yes! I do!

How did I never see this? Definitely not the type of work that should go without comments for this long. Not that any work does, but a coherent prologue? Especially ...

Hey DarkShadow! Got a few bits of critique for you here. Fortunately, they're pretty easy fixes and come down to two words. First word: paragraphs. Second: punctuation. Right now it's ...

Hey Serenity! I'm back again. Sorry it took me so long to get to this! I'm still liking what you have going on here very much. I also like that ...

Hey Rosey! 'Tas been awhile since I last read Cat Steps and figured there was no time like the present to stop by. I loved the dialogue in this. It ...

My high school had 7 periods, with an optional 8th and an optional "0" period. First bell rang at 7:52 on every day but Monday and we got out at ...

Azilaz! I think the reason I've never reviewed anything of yours is that I'm so useless with short stories and that you're too good for me to rely on the ...

Vi, I am now beaming in pride. Blow it up indeed! You've now introduced a nice immediate conflict/problem/situation with immediate repercussions to add a nice layer of frosting to the ...

Hey Serenity, I'm back! This time coming to you live from the floor of my living room. Now isn't that exciting?! (No, not really, I know.) So, this is still ...

Hi, Floral! I'm Rach, here to review. And... I guess I'll just be up front about it. Princesses running away from unwanted marriages aren't exactly the newest things in the ...

Hi, Serenity! I'm Rach, here to review for ya. First, I have to echo what Matthew said above me about spacing out your paragraphs. It's a bit tedious on your ...