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Re: Resurrection, Inversed
first of all i really enjoyed reading your poem. it was very deep and thoughtful, made you think of different things. and depending who you are and what experiences you ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Life.
i feel this poem is a generally well written and structured poem although it ends too quickly. the first three quarters are paced out perfectly but the ending is too ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Blood, Water and Tears (redone)
the lay out couldnt have been done any better. The story it was portraying and the sadness was heart breaking. I almost felt as if I were there witnessing these ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: storm
The wind howls and the wooden doors strain. Theres a storm coming ! The waves roll and crash to the towering rocks. Theres a storm coming ! Thunder bellows and ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: new here
Hi I'm Rachel and I'm brand new on here. please feel free to email me to say hello at :) thanks for the support some of you awesome people have ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: White prison
An empty page, Staring at me, Glaring at me. Daring me to defile it's perfect state, Smiling at all my failed attempts. To begin, commence, start. The hardest part of ...
May 11, 2009
