RGallagher

You can review mine if you like! and if you're bored by any chance.... I will

Can you please critique mine? I just posted is, hope you enjoy it =] Can we feed the Chocobo and the dragon or is it a no feeding policy like ...

This is something I started writing based off a Writers Digest prompt. Lemme know if you think any parts are weak, especially the ending. I wasn't really sure how to ...

Jeff was the mirror image of his father, had his father been a short boy of a young age and very little life plans. Haha that was funny =] This, ...

Hey! Can you critique mine? Name: Stop and Smell the Roses Genre: Action Fiction Summary: A young boy is kidnapped by a serial killer Word Count: about 2300 words Link: ...

I'd like a critique, please =] Hope you enjoy it!

If that spot's still open, you can review mine =] Hope you enjoy it!

Here's mine, It's about a young boy who is kidnapped by a serial killer. Hope you enjoy it =]

You can critique me! It's action and it's about a boy who is kidnapped serial killer so IDK if that would be considered horror for you or not. (There are ...

Stop and Smell the Roses It's about a young boy who is kidnapped by a serial killer. I'm trying to find any parts that are confusing, or lack detail and ...

Much, much better. The spacing works wonders also, very nicely done. I actually adore this now and there are very few things I would change, though perhaps I would suggest ...

This is the newly revised, 6th draft. Please lemme know what you think - I'm open to new ideas and suggestions. The more specific you are, the better! I think ...

Not sure if there is where it belongs but, here it goes. The title isn't permanent, not sure if I like it too much. By: Ralph Gallagher He walked by ...

Ring, ring You need a period or something similar at the end of all of these. You can't just leave off punctuation. "Hey Andy," a familiar voice answered, "listen, you ...

Wow so many friendly people. =] Nice to meet all of you! As for my favorite genres I'd have to say thriller types and crime fiction mostly. I read a ...