RGallagher

私は万能な佐倉からの批評を頂く! 私の執筆があまりを吸わないことを望みなさい。 (それは日本語に。ない) Title: Top Secret Genre: Not a clue Link: :twisted: :

You can critique mine if you'd like! I'd very mucho happy if you did. I'll also give you a shinny, new.... lolipop! Yummm.... Lolipops.... =] Have fun tearing it to ...

Since this is short, it's hard to give a long critique, but I'll do my best! It seems well written and error free. No grammar, punctuation or spelling errors jump ...

Nit-picks first! It wasn’t my fault really, it was the necklaces. Necklace's you forgot an apostrophe The car smelled McDonalds, and the driver couldn't stop talking about his recent visit ...

There seems to be a lot less mistakes in this chapter. I'm too lazy at this point to do a line-by-line but I'll tell you what to look out for. ...

First of all, you're supposed to have 2 reviews under your belt before you post a writing of yours. I'll ignore that for now, but I suggest you go review ...

Howdy there! I've got a little free time, so I figured I'd give you a critique! Hope I don't come off too harsh. It was the middle of the school ...

Hey! Welcome to the forums! I am a bit nitpicky in my critiques so bear with me. =] Jackson was like any other orphan. He had lost his parents when ...

Can you review this poem for me, please? =]

Thanks for the review! I'll get to work on all the things you suggested!

Actually, it says "NO multiple chapter requests, but feel free to ask for a crit a second time. " It doesn't say anything about multiple unrelated requests. =]

I was in the #nanowrimo chatroom and used the bot, BattleJesus, to give me a prompt. What does it give me you ask? [13:42] RANDOM PROMPT: Write from the point ...

Alright, in order to boost my review number and give back to the YWS community, I'm starting a review thread for myself! Please tell me the title, link, genre and ...

Can you review this for me? I have no clue really what genre it belongs to. It's kinda romance fiction but it's not romance fiction. Yay for confusing! Feel free ...

Just to let all you future reviews know, I did fix the name thing now. =P