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Re: Got Reviews?
*stabs break~my~heart repeatedly* Please read guidelines before asking for reviews.... It clearly says under "Does NOT like" POETRY. I suck with poetry critiques. Anyway, There's both done.... *grumbl
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Last Summer
Alright, poetry reviews aren't my specialty but I'll give it a try... I liked the poem. You used good description to paint a picture. It really makes you picture a ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Prologue: Killer (edited)
I really liked this. I couldn't spot any nitpicks. (but then again its almost midnight. I'll double check in the morning.) You did a great job with detail. The only ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: RG's prompt #3
Yay! Another person wrote something based on one of my prompts! Keep it up guys! My parents brought up my little brother to be the least bit of gay. That's ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Carter's Secret
yay! You used my prompt!
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Just Joined
*poke in eye* Hey Blueeee. Welcome to YWS! Just felt like I should come say hi even though you're ignoring my #nano message. =[ You dork. I
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Split personalities 0.1
Alrighty! I didn't really find any nitpicks that jumped out at me. It's well written but it leaves a lot of questions. You started out right in the middle of ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: For your Convenience
Hey! Can you review this short story for me? Title: The Elves are Coming Genre: Other Fiction Link: Word count: Around 615
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Need a review? Well, I love doing them!
Hey! Can you review this short story for me? Title: The Elves are Coming Genre: Other Fiction Link: Word count: Around 615 Thanks!
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: free reviews all around
Hey! Can you review this short story for me? Title: The Elves are Coming Genre: Other Fiction Link: Word count: Around 615
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Title: The Elves are Coming Genre: Other Fiction Link: Word count: Around 615 I
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Threnody's Review & Editing Establishment
Hello, Forever! Would you mind reviewing one of my short stories for me? =] Title: The Elves are Coming Genre: Other Fiction Link: Word count: Around 615
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Critique Shop of Horrors
Thanks for your review! Mind reviewing another one for me? Title: The Elves are Coming Genre: Other Fiction Link: Word count: Around 615
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: The Elves are Coming
Since this doesn't really fit into any of the other categories, I'll post it here. This is the first draft of something I wrote from a Writer's Digest prompt. I ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Stop and Smell the Roses (New Version!)
Thanks for all the reviews! I've been working a lot on this piece and have been trying to work on a lot of the suggestions you guys have made! I've ...
Jan 22, 2009