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I think that this was VERY well done. I loved reading it. The sort of saddened tone of it gave me chills, which is a good thing, I promise. I ...

I think I'll have to agree with Nate about taking out all the "likes". I think that would make it better, almost deeper somehow. At least, that's how it seems ...

I totally understand where you're coming from. And it frusterated me too. It droke me absloutely up the wall. But when people do that, they're really just trying to help. ...

8/10. I really like this. It's so...insightful. good! xoxo -Caitlin

I really liked the first one. It was well-written, and it made sense. I love how descriptive you were. I could really see what was going on. So, good use ...

I really liked this! Besides for a few typos, it was good. I think that it fit in with the book. It was good. That ending love scene was fine. ...

I have to agree with Amelia on this one. I think it was great. Not vauge at all. What the rest will think....who knows? You'll probably get a lot of ...

I, also, am into photography. My dad owned his own business when he was a photographer. And so I just got a new camera, too. I really like all your ...

Ok. So I posted a much shorter version of this poem and people didn't really like it. They thought that it was too short, and sort of repetitive. Well, this ...

Scrapped? I think not! This is really, very good. I love these sorts of poems. And, I understood it [kinda] which makes it better. Because there are a lot of ...

I really liked this poem. I really didn't find anything wrong with it. :D which is good. I loved your use of imagery. I could relate to this poem, which ...

I really liked this. It's well done for the writing of an eleven year old. When I was 11 there was no way I could write like this. Granted, there ...

9/10 because of my sheer love for it. ;) xoxo -Caitlin

8/10 because i have no idea who'll be able to answer that question. if you talk to grass it might talk back. who knows where that came from??

Hey. I have absolutely no idea who you are but...that's ok. Hey, I'm Caitlin! And umm, welcome back! :D xoxo -Caitlin