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  • Lyrics Re: Invincible

    This was awesome, I'm trying to learn how to play the guitar so I envy you lol But the lyrics are good, and the concept was nice; the quality is ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Harmony (Loveless)

    I once knew a Harmony, middle name was peace, and that’s exactly what she offered me. Said if I was true maybe she would fall for me, and that if ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Portrait of His Funeral (reviews please?)

    Your imagery is great. I like your ending; I understand what you were saying. I don't know why but this poem just feels kind of dull to me, but it's ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Mastering an Art

    I understand what you were trying to do but this wasn't that interesting. Like the above post states this is a great concept, and I know you were using repetition ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Looking Glass

    Nice, Nice, Nice :) The poem was consistently good, though the ending was obviously the best. Your choice of words is impressive, and this is a very good topic. There's ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Last

    Last It's hard to grasp that space is so vast, And one day or another that space will collapse. Time will then cease, and light will go black; Super massive ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello :)

    Hello everyone :) I'm new to this writing thing and recently started writing a fantasy novel; I do a little bit of poetry as well. I'm looking forward to getting ...

    Dec 27, 2009


I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees.
— Pablo Neruda