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Re: Invincible
This was awesome, I'm trying to learn how to play the guitar so I envy you lol But the lyrics are good, and the concept was nice; the quality is ...
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Re: Harmony (Loveless)
I once knew a Harmony, middle name was peace, and that’s exactly what she offered me. Said if I was true maybe she would fall for me, and that if ...
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Re: Portrait of His Funeral (reviews please?)
Your imagery is great. I like your ending; I understand what you were saying. I don't know why but this poem just feels kind of dull to me, but it's ...
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Re: Mastering an Art
I understand what you were trying to do but this wasn't that interesting. Like the above post states this is a great concept, and I know you were using repetition ...
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Re: The Looking Glass
Nice, Nice, Nice :) The poem was consistently good, though the ending was obviously the best. Your choice of words is impressive, and this is a very good topic. There's ...
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Re: Last
Last It's hard to grasp that space is so vast, And one day or another that space will collapse. Time will then cease, and light will go black; Super massive ...
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Re: Hello :)
Hello everyone :) I'm new to this writing thing and recently started writing a fantasy novel; I do a little bit of poetry as well. I'm looking forward to getting ...
Dec 27, 2009
