R3b3L

Tomorrow around 8 pm EST. I'm going to be reading/writing my story and playing music live on Ustream, if you want to stop by I'd appreciate it.

Yeah thanks for all the feedback, most of you said that the flow was off but it honestly isn't (no disrespect) I'll record it for you guys when I get ...

This is amazing, your rhyming skills are impressive. You worded everything perfectly in my opinion, and your structure is flawless. "When time is torture The temperature gets colder Wish I ...

Someone seems very angry. This was good; but if someone wasn't dying every other line I would like it much better, though I do understand that you were expressing your ...

I like everything but these two lines. They say you aren’t pretty or cool But we girls know, boys like to drool! The topic is pretty cool, it's been done ...

Welcome, I'm a noob too :)

I'm really impressed with the stars in the background lol (I can't draw a star for my life) But on a more serious note, I liked it; but you need ...

I loved it :) I liked your rhyme scheme, though you could use some more imagery here and there. I thought the poem was appropriately named, and I really liked ...

Sweet

Wow first time I've seen one :) Well Hello, I'm R3b3l your newest follower haha

Alrighty then, where do I sign up? :)

Ohhhhhhhh.... Hmm, Is there a group for "Good" people? haha

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Lol Thanks... But what the hell is a Snoink?

Thank you :) At first I was heartbroken by your review that's why it took me so long to reply haha I've been really excited about my story and I ...