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Sounds good to me--great tone setting, impressive vocab, and interesting beginning. No hint as to the time period it takes place in, however...that might help...or is it supposed to be ...

Impressive. That's the first word that came to my mind after reading this. Somehow you've managed to put emotions on paper, (or in this case a computer screen) which is ...

There's no poll, Hunter. In regards to your story, however; This seems like a rather abrupt beginning to a story...the dream was well described; it flowed well, used simplistic yet ...

I agree, QiGuaiGongFu...especially since many of these words are just slang variations of current words..not that I don't use slang or anything. It's kind of hard to not use slang ...

What is it with you and your untitle poems being so great? Put a title to this (as well as the other untitled one...). It's very well written, full of ...

I can tell this poem is very personal to you, but I like how even though the three of you (?) would understand it better than anyone else, there's still ...

Thank you Griffinkeeper, Nefer, and Noxious, so far I like the site very much and am looking froward to reading more soon... Fontroy--you are very odd....and your spelling is...less than ...

...Wow. Two poems in a row from you that have made me say that. I'm impressed. Who is the guy? (Rhetorical) In any case; I enjoyed reading this a lot. ...

In short, I didn't feel this at all. There was something in the wording that made it seem a little dull, very emotionless, even though you used words like panic ...

An older poem, apparently. Age has not diminished its beauty, however. Interesting, well written, for the most part well paced, and easy to read. Good work. Only one thing in ...

"Chewed home to jagged pieces" is the reference point for "You were home once." Ah, so it does. Carry on then. Nice work. --Q

Interesting, Bobo. I like the small touches you put in there that efined the two very different characters of the Devil and his immitation of God. Most notably the simple ...

Agreed, Snoink; the military terminaology does seem to take away from the fantasy element of the story... Hunter--also agreed. Gryphons, mythologically, did not have hands and therefore would not use ...

Derivatives are fun, I rather enjoy them myself... To me, this sounds like you're using Calculus as a front to write about your life, or maybe an ASPECT of your ...

Hi everyone, I'm Quiz. I like basketball, reading, and writing, in that order mostly, girls are thrown in the mix there as well, but that's more a lifestyle than a ...