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Re: What Are You Wearing?
I'm wearing a Kobe Throwback Jersey, BBall shorts, Snoopy Boxers...and that's about it.
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: What I've Become
Yes, I believe it would. Perhpas something along the lines of "struggling to her feet, she stumbles...." or something to that extent? Thank you for the consideration. --Q
Oct 24, 2005 -
Re: k
Hmmm....I think there is a better way to put this, actually. The way you have it, anything other than completely on the right or completely on the left is Bisexual. ...
Oct 24, 2005 -
Re: What I've Become
All was wonderfully narrated until his mother pulled the gun. She moved much too quickly and efficiently for being stabbed in the neck. Also, three shots direct shots to the ...
Oct 24, 2005 -
Re: Challenge 10/17 Autobiography Haiku
It must be hard to write an autobiographical Haiku. The best approach would probably be some sort of symbolism, since Haiku are supposed to be about nature... Child on the ...
Oct 24, 2005 -
Re: The Blade
Though I cannot relate, I can venture into the emotions involved... I don't feel the couplets really matches the poem. However, that's mrely a personal choice; if it works for ...
Oct 24, 2005 -
Re: Scars
Nice work, Misty Lynn. The prologue was particularly nice... The character is very cool. I like the idea that he is a very attractive person, but with so many scars ...
Oct 20, 2005 -
Re: I need a new title (formerly: The Missive)
Nice. Very nice. I like the analogy of people as countries. This couple stanzas-- It wasn’t so long ago I left prints in your sand, And you wandered through my ...
Oct 18, 2005 -
Re: Contest Entry: "Street Ball"
Noted and corrected, thank you Carmina. --Q
Oct 17, 2005 -
Re: THE TALE OF THE DRAGON JEWELS
Per your request... Well, I refuse to continue beating this particular dead horse, rather, I'll offer you help instead. If you'd like, I'll go through this and edit it all ...
Oct 17, 2005 -
Re: Unconditional Morphine Rant
By your request... I thought this was very creative. Your word choices were dead on, there were no words in it that leapt out at me, screaming "FIX ME DAMN ...
Oct 17, 2005 -
Re: Contest Entry: "Street Ball"
Written in twenty minutes for that contest of Ryan's... Darren gazed across the park from his place in the shadows, watching his target shoot hoops with his friends. Glancing down ...
Oct 15, 2005 -
Re: person above ya! #3
^ Has, in her signature, a quote that I have been infatuated with ever since I heard it.
Oct 15, 2005 -
Re: Mary Colthane and the Dead Man [beginning]
As per your request, I have read this (a second time check your first response lol). Here are my thoughts; Setting: unknown, appears to be late American colonial period (1600-1700?) ...
Oct 15, 2005 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
Either Pink Floyd or just a random prism...either way, pretty nifty. 8/10
Oct 15, 2005
