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Re: Scall's Magic
A good story though i think it could benfit from more description about secenry. In answer to you question i understood the game of bones perfectly. I think you should ...
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Re: Motivation
Motivation March 3 2006 The last hit was like a steam train desperately hurtling straight at my stomach. I fell forward, spitting blood onto the ground. The three tormenters stood ...
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Re: Chionophobia #2 /P
This was not as good as the first installment. Yet it was still very enjoyable to read.
Jan 3, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #1 /P
I thought this is the best piece I've read from the society so far though i have not read that many. The only piece that felt out of place was ...
Jan 3, 2007 -
Re: Motivation
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Re: The Face
javascript:emoticon(':arrow:')I thought that the story was a little bland. It just seems like this guy was captured and tortured. javascript:emoticon(':arrow:')The only hint of a character was when he
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Re: Black and white
I thought that the story was a little immature. The dialouge was very unrealistic. It could do with more chracterisation aswell so more tension can be created
Jan 3, 2007