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OK honesty. I didn't really like it. I did like the first half, but the second half just really irritated me. It was like some sort of unsubtle propaganda for ...

The reason that cigarettes and all tobacco products will not be banned is due to the capitalist society. This is exactly the same problem we have with global warming. While ...

First off i don't think it is too much like lord of the rings. It has similarities but few books in the 'Epic' fantasy genre don't. I do think think ...

First off i would like to say that i am not really a fan of poetry. I dont really know why i'm in the poetry section. I just fancied a ...

thanks alot for your citique i'll will take into account all you've said

Please leave a critique even if its only small

I'm no punk. It wasn't really meant to be a story i was using it to create a chracter and wanted to hear what people thought of him. For instance ...

This was in answer to an exam question. Incase your wondering why it was written

Question 5 - Describe Yourself (27 Marks) Pretentious. In fact so very pretentious that I write many words few of which I can spell. Also so very pretentious that when ...

This is the start of a hopefully entertaining story. First off please dont anyone get offended by what the character says. Secondly there are some words in there that might ...

Thanks. I am working on second story and your replies will really help. Any one else reading i would greatly appreciate any views you have

It's good. Very well written. The one thing i would say is that i'd like it to have a point. The first two sections are good as they're just two ...

Please bare in mind that it is my first attempt at a short story. Thankyou for your Critique

Slow to start. It was enjoyable to read but could do with quicker action as this story is like many others on the site. The chracterisation is also slightly unbeliviable ...

This was an enjoyable piece to read. You gave us enough of the mans personality to show us that we knew he was more than unbalanced but not so much ...