Quetseli

Thsi is a good poem, though I don't see any story to it. But some poems don't have a clear story to which urges reader to figure it out. And ...

It's a lovely poem! Though I'm still trying to understand whats going on. Is something really coming towards her? It's just me, but good job! Keep it up!:3

This is pretty good! The only thing I would watch in your use of past and present terms. A few times I caught the use of the opposite term, but ...

This is so wonderfully well done. I love it! I love how you continuously relate things to other stuff(Jeez, I forgot the word for that!). It makes the piece more ...

I can't move. It's as if the overgrown, deep green grass patch I stand on has wrapped itself around my feet, forcing me to stare at the eerie yet beautiful ...

It's a good story! The only thing I would say to fix is deeper thoughts of the characters and a better description of what's going on in the world around ...

I think its fine. The proportions are off, but realism with carcoal isnt easy work. XD Realism in general isn't easy, but you are doing well for a first carcoal ...

I don't beileve I heard of a villanelle, if that relates at all to how the poem is written. It's a confusing poem, the idea of it unclear, but I ...

Aw. I's lovely. It sounds like it has a sad ending to it though, if I'm thinking correct. :P But I think is a sweet poem written to a once ...

It has a strange story to it. I can't quite grasp it, but it seems as if she was murdered. A young girl who was nice and beautiful to everyone ...

It's lovely work! I think its done wonderfully. The thing you could do though is describe the characters, their surrounds, and actions. Like when scolding a child, what is the ...

This is a good start to something interesting! I like it. :3 I think you can discribe the characters and the church a bit more, it helps with the mental ...

It's love. I sense that someone is trying to show how much their love is worth and how they see it by giving it the idea of a painting and ...

Aw, that's a good man for you. Trying to learning something, getting humiltated in the process, just to sing a love song. That's sweet.

It's has a good turn. You talk about this hate for someone else only to turn it around and speak about forgiveness. Has a mixed emotion to it and it's ...