Quetseli

Why thank for the like and the comment! With the serial killer, I was afraid to post this because people might see it vulgar or see me disgusting, but you ...

I think you're starting out with an idea in your head. But with idea is something of a climax to your story here and because of it your rushing the ...

I'm not much of a poetry crit because I never really understood it as well, but my sister, beccawilleatyou, loves poetry and will probably review your work. She just joined ...

I couldn't decide whether to put this in Action/Adventure or Science Fiction, but it is a mix of both. Leaning a bit more towards Action/Adventure. But enjoy and be a ...

I liked this. You did very well explaining to the reader what was happening and the conversation with the characters was very fluid. You kept the story moving at a ...

The entire time I was readin' this, the beat of the songs was in my head and the singer's voice was saying the lyrics!:lol: I was smilin' like a fool! ...

OMG! I feel so stuipd now! >:[ Thinks for the pointers, I'll work one those too. :] I think I messed up because I was thinking about the five senses ...

Yeah, it wasn't good. So I changed it now from "Your own Death" to "You're fading away"(As you can see). I just hope it's a better choice. :p

This is a poem I came up with in about ten or more minutes. I changed the ending sentence (The other one ruined the poem). But here you go-Five Silence ...

It's an interesting poem. I'm unsure of the story inside it, either if you are talking about a sickness or you are talking about something else. The last line is ...

Wow, thinks for all the comments! I didn't really think people would take a second look at this. Big surprise! X3 To the people who pointed out mistakes-I think I ...

I think this was really nice. I'm not perfect at judging poetry because i'm terrible at it myself. :p I'm more of a sci-fi writer. But you did good with ...

They're really nice pictures! The thing I would suggest is if you are trying to make one thing single out from the back ground is get a closer pic, like ...

These are some pictures I took today of spring in Kentucky. They are all with a digital camera. If you ever come to Kentucky during this time this is what ...

I think this is something different from what I read before. It's interesting and it makes question so much about the characters more then anything. I do wish to know ...