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Thanks sis :D

Chapter 6: Gym Class I open the door and stop in front of Mr. Wolf’s class. He teaches Calculus. I hate calculus. I despise it with a passion. I am ...

This has great potential. The title doesn't fit this story too well. You need to put more emotion into and description. And also think about structuring the paragraphs differently so ...

WHOA!!! I thought you were talking about me for a sec, I saw myself so plainly it was scary. I know how you feel when you get to that place ...

Ok, so this is very interesting. But like what everyone else has said, it does need work and have great potential. Try to be more descriptive and put emotion in ...

Ok, so this is very interesting. But like what everyone else has said, it does need work and have great potential. Try to be more descriptive and put emotion in ...

Ok so I'm not going to do the stupid thing and repeat whatever one else says, that's a waste and ulitmately doesn't help you. Despite the cliches and there were ...

This poem is...I have no words for it. Thats not a bad thing. Not by any means. I've been trying to think of a title. And what I have so ...

I love this sis. There's nothing about this I would change. And I know for a fact "the one you love the most" would love this too. ;) Keep up ...

This was a good story, short and to the point. and not to many words. I am not going to repeat what everyone else said. but other than that. its ...

I liked this piece. It is true. I am not going to repeat so that was all. Keep writing :D

Yeah i noticed that when i posted it. I guess I forgot to fix it. haha.

You mean chapter 6 honey. haha

Oh my jeepers!! Sis I love it!!! We are defientely working on chapter 6 tonight. There were some concerns I had but I will save them for tonight. I know ...

Chapter 5: Surprise!! Deep in the dark, flaming pits most commonly referred to as Hell, Zack was currently getting ready for his new day at a new school. He was ...