Qoh16

I liked this. I love the emotion. Other than that good luck. keep writing :)

EPIC STORY!!! KEEP WRITING SO I CAN KEEP READING!!!!!!! :D

This poem was very intersting, I love how the narrator potrayed different emotions, mostly the sadness of not having anyone in their happily ever after. The thing that was a ...

ok first thing is first. I liked this story. I loved the imagery in the preface. IcyFlame basically said what I was going to. so i wont repeat. but i ...

Omg. I love this. you don't know how much I love all things bibical related. it is very personal for me. I'm not going to repeat any of what everyone ...

This was a really good story, i couldn't stop reading. It sort of reminds me of Never-Ending Story. And I saw that movie like a billion times. So that's a ...

This story was interesting, it had me reading through the end. I thought it was good. The only thing was the ending was a little bit of an upset. but ...

This was a great story. It was so sad. It had me reading til the end. I didn't see anything particularly wrong with it. Except maybe you should add a ...

This was interesting. I thought the description was really good. I could picture everything in my head. You are right though, the chapter is a little slow. But I'll bear ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. This was so cute. I loved that it was the story of a ball of yarn. I had to something similar for English class. I couldn't really find anything ...

Omg. This was so powerful. And I so can relate. I've been in abusive relationships myself. But the one thing I had a problem with was the MC, she didn't ...

This was confusing for me. But I did think this was funny. Other that, I have nothing to say. Good Luck. Keep Writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, so I thought this was very interesting. There is nothing I can really critique. Keep up the good work. This a great job. Keep writing. Good luck!!!! :) ~Qoh16

This was a really good start, but I noticed a few spelling mistakes. But everyone else has too. So I won't be a repeat. But this is a really good ...

Sis!!! I love this so much. I could really feel the emotion, that this came from the heart. I love it. And I know she will love it too. Keep ...