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I loved it . It was really good.I. nw you got a good grade!!! Keep up the great work sisie!! Happy writing!!

This has great potential but the onlything i really saw was you jumped into the plot a little too quickly without any backstory. Dont worry. I have that problem too. ...

This was sad but a goodie. I love the imagery. I wish i could do that myself. This is a great job you did splendidly,. Keep writing!!! :D

This was cute in a child-like way. It was entertaining and funny. Keep up the great work. Keep writing!!! XD

I love it sis! Except maybe a different pix XD i know i havent been helping lately but i promise to help you more. Great job as alwahs!! Keep writing!! ...

I thought this was cute! Very funny and comedic. Great work!!!! Happy writing!! :D

This is fabulous! I loved the imagery. Honestly i didnt want it to end. Great job! Keep writing!!! :D

You are so right. I'm straight but I have no problem with gays, bisexuals or tansgenders. Everyone is entitled to live their life how they seem fit and if that ...

This was interesting, as for the ending...i agree with you. it does need work. But at this moment i think im braindead too. XD So i can't really help, except ...

Omg. I know how that feels....ive had some stalkers...not gonna get into the specifics. But I did like the rhyming and it made me laugh, especially at the end. So, ...

This is so true and relateable. Great job. Keep writing!!!!

This was great. Feels like something i would write. This poem touched me in a very personal way. I dont know if that is good or bad but anyway great ...

Haha. I liked this. It was really funny. And I needed a laugh. And what you said is so true. I think my moms has figured out i havent been ...

SISSY!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Keep up the good work. I'll be here if you need help with the next chapter. As always. :) Keep Writing!!!

Good poem. We all can relate. Good job. Happy Writing!!! :D