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Ooooo! I liked this. But sadly I don't have enough time to get all into the reviewing. So i'm going to keep it short and sweet. I think you should ...

This was cute and interesting. I liked the fun little story you had in here. I am not big on rhyming nor can I rhyme in a poem to save ...

Haha! I liked this. It made me laugh through the whole thing. This was entertaining and funny. Great job. Keep Writing!! :)

I agree with Yanni1995. Just fix the one spelling mistake and punctuation and this poem will be fanstastico!! XD This was great. Good luck and Happy Writing!!! :)

Hanging From A Cross: J.C.'s Story Come on! Tell me where we are going. I really don't like this...why the hell are we here? No, I never said I wanted ...

Wow this is truly amazing! Keep up the great work! Happy writing!! :D

I don't know but all your stuff is making me cry. I think that's a good thing. This poem was interesting. I liked the flow and the word choice. I ...

Thank you, for all the reviews. Your support means a lot.

Ok, so I couldn't wait, you got me all curious. Haha. So I can't find anything wrong with this. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS. I can't really say how i feel ...

Thank you.

Im sorta trying to write the next story. but its not coming out the way i want it to.

OMG!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! And i am so glad you posted some more!!! I can't wait for me. Keep writing so I can keep reading!!! XD

No, i didn't mean to offend anyone. I'm sorry if I did. This is just for fun. Not trying to offend anyone. purely fiction. :D

The Bad Apple: Eve's Story Okay, so honestly I don't have a clue as to how to start this out. I'm not one of those touchy-feely-I-need-to-tell-all-of-my-business kind of person. But ...

This was interesting. I agree this is a little too short to be a prologue. So i suggesy making it longer abnd adding more details. You left a lot of ...