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Zoya or Aurelia. I can't decide!!!

ZERRROO!!! of course ;)

OH MY GOSH IT IS EVEN BETTER THE SECOND TIME!!!!!!!! ;)

Uh....i really don't have anything to say about this. It is sorta disturbing. But I laughed the whole way through reading this poem. Which i think is even more disturbing. ...

I liked this. I thought this was great. I also read the Percy Jackson and The Olmypians series and loved it. So I liked this too. Keep Writing!!!

This was interesting. It does seem rushed though. And you had a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Other than that. great job. Keep writing!!! But edit this first. ;) ...

This was interesting. Although, I am a bit confused as to where she is going. Is she running away? Why did she go back to the house if she was? ...

This was so interesting. I am curious as to where this will go. That's all i can say because I really didn't see anything wrong with it. I hope you ...

This was so interesting. I am curious as to where this will go. That's all i can say because I really didn't see anything wrong with it. I hope you ...

This was so interesting. I am curious as to where this will go. That's all i can say because I really didn't see anything wrong with it. I hope you ...

I don't know honestly, I think I Google'd it. But that was at 13 (I think) I sorta stopped going on it and forgot about it. I wasn't really into ...

NOOOOOOOOOO!!! It ended. Darn I wantd so much more. The one thing I have a concern with is the end. the last lines about the Zacharias to be exact. It ...

Omg. I love this story. It is so entertaining that I am skipping doing my own Chemistry homework (XD) to read this. It seems like a cross between Harry Potter ...

I loved it sis!!! It was absolutely wonderful. Keep up the great job!!!

Thanks. If you like this then you might like the other one.