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THE ENDING IS EPIC! it kinda reminds me of me and my own brother without all the sexual innuendos and implications. This is cool. Not something i would usually read ...

Aw this story was cute and i liked it :D the only things wrong with it is it was a little fast. Pace it better. And maybe start with Amanda ...

Ok first off, I really like this story. It kept me so interested that I am currently reading this while in school. Haha. But honestly wanted to know more. You ...

Thanks for all the reviews, they are really helpful. It gives me al lot to think about. But I do have one question what is a dialogue tag??? Do you ...

This is very interesting. Not my cup of tea but it did keep me interested. Keep writing. :D

I LOVE LOVE LOVE the imagery. I can't wait until you write some more. :D

Aw. this is cute. I loved the idea of seeing ghosts. It sorta reminds me of that series by Meg Cabot. Which is a good thing because i read it ...

Chapter 1: Dreamstate Rayia jolts awake, screaming at her empty room. She looks around in panic, searching for something. Anything. Anything remenant of her father. Her father. Her dream. It ...

Thanks. I just didn't feel like posting the other chapters. But i will. And thanks for the feedback : )

Prologue: Oblivion Darkness. That is all she sees when she looks around. Black lines of nothing sucking her in. Crushing her skull, making pound. She tries to scream and no ...