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I thought this was so funny! haha. The only thing that Heroes fear are Super Hero Wives! I loved the last line!! :D

I liked it. but it seems a little rushed and has a lot of holes in the story. Give some background to the characters. They don't have structure and i ...

yeah it is a little much. Thanks for the review!

First, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! and i am being totally serious. (lets just say I have a thing for demon stories) But the one thing I didn't like, when she ...

Haha. I will. And to find out the noise and what happens to her you have to read the rest of the book :D

Chapter 2: Weird Science The bell has rung for 2nd period. The halls are brimming full of kids. It looks like the walls are about to burst. People are pushing ...

Damn. I feel bad for Nate. I can totally relate with what the girl is going through, loving two people at the same time. And being told you have to ...

I love this piece I can really relate! Because I hate PDA too. This was cute. A little short. But it was cute. Keep writing!!

Awwwwwwwwwwww!!! This was too cute!! And pretty good for a story made up on the fly, :D A little bit of grammar mistakes you can fix but other than that ...

I liked this. It has the imagery i can never seem to do. :( Anyway, it was also a little bit confusing as to who was speaking (but you cleared ...

Hey. I liked this story, well not the abusive part but it really does bring to light the reality of abusive relationships and how that kind of love is wrong. ...

I loved this! I laughed so loud, my mother is looking at me weird. I also love the Harry Potter references, im a fan. Well i guess that's it since ...

Thanks.

Why do I feel so miserable, like there's something wrong with my life? Why do I feel so miserable, like I'm in this state of strife? My heart is always ...

Aw this was sad. But I liked it. And it also was a little underdeveloped but keep writing :)