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So...I'm Depression. The girl calls me an ass, an abuser "GO AWAY!!" Haha. Here she goes again. Like the yelling is going to help. It doesn't do anything. It just ...

Very Little Mermaid-esque but love it. it is like a funnier version of the movie. Love it! You did have some flow problems that were a little awkward at times ...

This was interesting. Some small grammatical errors. But interesting. Keep Writing!

First. You know the whole memory thing that we talked about, and you misspelled some words and work on your grammar in some places. That's the bad part. The good ...

Oh. Just wondering...

this from personal expierence?? cuz....WOW! I was so shocked i can't really nitpick...

I disagree with April, I think men should carry us more :P But it was grammar lacking. and it lacked the most important part. The end!!!! I wanna know what ...

No. don't do that. Don't get me wrong, I like the story, and happen to love the Little Mermaid. So im gonna read the next eight chapters now!! :D

Just to put it out there this reminds me of the movie The Little Mermaid. ;)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Omg!!! This was so cute! You had some spelling mistakes and what not. But overall it was cute! The ending was a little akward. It's flow was off or ...

Ok so this is a good start, I liked it. Now i can read part 2 and 3. But the thing was give a little bit more imagery to the ...

This was was a little akward at times. But now i wanna read the novella!! Greg is the jealous type, And he is so rude. How do I steal Grace? ...

This was WHOA! It was a really good story that it took me like three times read it because I wanted to savor every bit. Anyway, the only things I ...

Damn! This poem is just flawless. I like the emotion. Reminds me of where i grew up, roughin it in New York. Anyway, I liked it. Keep writing...definetely.

First, off this was interesting, It isn't really my cup of tea but I did find it interesting. The only problem I had was I really wouldn't have categorized this ...