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I loved this. This was absolutely funny and so entertaining. I can so relate. I don't wanna get a real job btw. haha. I couldnt really find anything wrong with ...

I totally feel you. Trust me I get it. How i feel is exactly like this.

Sorry chica. But i agree with ButterFinger. It does read more like prose than actual poetry. But it is a very good job. Keep it up. Happy writing!!! :) 16

First thing is first, you need to break up the poem into stanzas. It would be way easier to read. Other than that. I liked this. In a sad sorta ...

Thank yah!! but im still havin trouble with the second part of his story :(

Thanks. Haha. And okay. ;)

I loved the imagery of this poem. It was very descriptive and emotional. Also the flow of it was very soulful. Great job. Keep up the good work. Happy Writing ...

I don't really know what to say about this...if this is about rape like i think it is....then i really don't have anything to say. that's not a bad thing. ...

Please critique my short stories series!! Especially my new one. You can read the rest if you want but don't have to :D

I'm sorry about you friend. I know how it feels. Onto the poem, it was amazingly beautiful. Your friend would be proud. And so should you. Great job. Good luck ...

These pix are cool. I wanna take great pix like these. :( but sadly, I'mma writer. Okay, I'm gonna stop rambling. Great pics. :) 16

Hayden-Thanks so much for the idea. I'm glad you like it. :) Fortune Cookie XD- No one is going to eat you except me :D Kidding.

WELL! This was absolutely AMAZING! I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I will admit i sorta was watching when you would put up the next chapter ...

Haha. Te amo tambien y siempre mi hermanita!!! You said it right ;) And thank you, it means so much my little fortune cookie XD

The Burning Nest: Lot’s Story-Part 1 Crap. That was my home. Even if it was a bunch of weird creeps. Still. That was my house. Now where the hell are ...